Monday, April 21, 2025

NaPoWriMo - April, 2025 - Poem: Fear Full - Rewrite of "Cave Dwellers"

NaPoWriMo 2025

04/10/25 - Day 10 of 30

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NaPoWriMo Prompt

Now for our daily prompt (optional, as always). Yesterday, we looked at a poem that used sound in a very particular way, to create a slow and mysterious feeling. Mark Bibbins’ poem, “At the End of the Endless Decade,” uses sound very differently, with less eerieness and more wordplay. Today, we’d like to challenge you to write a poem that, like Bibbins’, uses alliteration and punning. See if you can’t work in references to at least one word you have trouble spelling, and one that you’ve never quite been able to perfectly remember the meaning of.


My Poem


Cave Dwellers

(Original Poem)


Clunking spelunkers descend

Through cooling guano they wend.

From the limestone vault depend

Armies of bats, chittering rats,

Rabid cave denizens.


Horned millipedes meander

Thirsty mosquitoes muster

Harried scorpions posture. 

Critters and creatures and ghastly creepers

Patient Black Widows tether and spin.


Indefatigable fauna

Fecundity found far underground

Undeniably NOT

My cup of tea!




Fear Full

(Rewritten In Free Verse Form With “Emotional Show-Don’t-Tell”)



Exploring a cave would crush my crushing fear of creepy crawlies.

I’d free myself from frantic fits of itching panic

With exposure to all those scaly, hairy legs and beady eyes at once.


Can you imagine?


Who’d see vaulted bats as flying, squeaking, sonar-seeking eco-buddies?

Flea-furred, blood-sucking vermin, ready to strike like Dracula at night.


Are scorpions beneficent because they control insect populations?

Angular alien designs waving tail stingers like black flags of death.


How can they let millipedes meander across bare skin on a million tiny tip-toes?
Unholy armored earthworms with peril dripping from poisonous spiky termini.


And why are rats kept as pets like cuddly, miniature pink-eyed cats?

Overrunning oily fur-bags, fangs crowding in, like injectors of rabies and plague.


Why don’t you go on ahead?

I’m trapped by indecision.

Is speluncaphobia worse than entomophobia?


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